Wednesday, December 17, 2008

TWO DOGS PART 14

Time for straight Crippin’…


First, I got to show them I know my shit. I take them to see the Rev. He doesn’t look too happy when we run the underage girls out of his bed and drag him to the basement lab. In fact, he needs some encouragement. The bois are more than happy to oblige.

The Rev. sits at one of the computer tables, his head on the table, his hands behind his back when they’re done. Bloody and bowed. We gather around him.

”Tha's all I know...swear to God... tha's all.”

“You sure that's all of 'm?...all right...if you can put money in his account you can take it out.”

I watch him transfer the funds out of the captain’s account into one I’ve set up. Every fucking penny. The bois load up the boxes with the Bibles full of cash. I’ve got to show my bois I mean business. We have the addresses of the captain’s whole crew. We’ve closed out his private account. Taken all of the cash. Now it’s time for the Rev’s last rites.

He’s begging for his life. Or mercy and forgiveness. He might get it from God, but I doubt it. He sure as shit ain’t gonna get it from me. I rip off the gaudy crucifix he wears on a thick, gold chain around his neck. Cover one of his eyes with a playing card. Duece of spades. Hold it in place by driving the crucifix through his eye…into his brain.

I want to make sure when the captain finds him, he knows who did it.

Timing is going to be everything tonight. I divide my boys up. Send them out after the crew. Tell them what to do to each one. I already knew where they were. Finding out from the Rev was a cover so the bois wouldn’t suspect anything. Have to keep my cover to the end.

They meet back up with me three hours later. The whole crew’s dead…except one. The leader. We’re about to find out just how much he loves being fucked by niggers, instead of the other way around.

To make a long story short, the bois chase him out of his house. Catch up with him in the railroad yards. In a boxcar. Stomp him half to death. Strip him. Hang him by his balls in the box car. It’s personal for some of them. He fucked some of them over in the jail. More personal for me.

I slit his throat. The way we used to kill dibe for stew. I enjoy watching him bleed out. They ask about the captain now. I tell them he’s mine. They don’t argue. I have one of them call him. Tell him to check his bank account overseas. I know where he’ll go. I’ll be waiting for him when he gets back.

8 comments:

abaddon911 said...

Well... That got pretty messy, pretty fast.
Those guys left the earth rather quickly. They were lucky.
I am curious to see how the Captain will exit this world.
I suspect it will not be so quick.
As always though, we will see.

Christopher Blake said...

They didn't leave as quickly as you might think...you have to remember, this is a treatment...their endings, in the screenplay, are very vivid...and horrific...in retrospect, as I was serializing this, I should have elaborated more on some parts...a mistake I hope not to make on the next one...

neilbsmith78 said...

This is very good material. I have been following the blogs diligently. I look forward to seeing how it will all play out. I also look forward to more of the Bible Study Blogs as well as the Dexter / Psychopath Blogs.
Thank you for the time you put into this. I have been telling people about your blog and many have been checking it out.

timiosanthos said...

I just read the "Two Dogs" blogs. Impressive work! I like the story very much. Neil told me about your page, I have been meaning to check it out. I should have checked it out sooner!

Christopher Blake said...

Thanks to all...would you like to see this character again? He returns in another story of epic proportions...dealing with JFK, RFK, Martin Luther King, conspiracies...and the Apocolypse...

abaddon911 said...

Is that all? what about Jimmy Hoffa, Elvis Presley, The Lost City of Atlantis, The Holy Grain and The Spear of Destiny?
;)
I would LOVE to see more of this character, as I am sure you could have guessed. I have been all over this. I love the way the character thinks and they way he executes his strategies!

Christopher Blake said...

No fair jumping ahead!!!

By the way, is Holy Grain used for communion wafers?

Just kidding...

abaddon911 said...

good one! that is what I get for being a smart ass who types too quickly for his own good...

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